It was an eventful morning at the North Point Inn today. Nina Cortez, the bookkeeper, and Kevin Blohm, a cook, were robbed by knifepoint a couple minutes before 9 in the morning. The man who robbed the Inn took about $130 in cash off of Cortez’s desk and stabbed Blohm to death in the hallway. Nina Cortez was not injured in the robbery.
“He just took the money and walked out,” Cortez says. Police are still investigating the crime. Just goes to show, you should always be prepared and be cautious of your surroundings and suspicious matter.
I don't think I would suggest to my family to stay there! What kind of neighborhood is that place in? It happened in the morning too! I like the term: eventful morning.
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ReplyDeleteI always enjoy reading your stories. You did a good job on adding in the details. The story flows quite well. Also adding in that quote directly from Cortez really helps connect it all together.
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