Dr. Robert Schwartz, a cardiologist at Abbott Northwestern Hospital in Minneapolis, has revealed that after studying 25 male runners who completed the Twin Cities Marathon for 25 consecutive years, are actually less healthy than non-athletes. 62 percent of them had more plaque in their coronary arteries than a group of non-athletes.
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